tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4939817386489990431.post5868387248973033714..comments2014-10-24T18:05:57.653-07:00Comments on Art4Students: HomeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03632619520416980105noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4939817386489990431.post-18899884387419610162014-10-24T17:45:56.378-07:002014-10-24T17:45:56.378-07:00Very challenging composition...enjoyed looking at ...Very challenging composition...enjoyed looking at all the elements<br /><br />Suggest that you be prepared to adjust goals....and be happy with direction<br /><br />Enjoy the traditional style and use of value. This is an interesting angle and intricate with details.<br /><br />I would perhaps make the tree and background more obvious as to what they are - 4<br /><br />The shading is a bit off...as it should be darker in some places. The details are great on it. Perhaps add some straight solid lines.<br /><br />I like the amount of detail in the picture. The shading and lines could use some attention but also really like the landscape.<br /><br />I suggest that you add highlights that work with the perspective. It is also OK for your idea to change...it works!<br /><br />Alien Art Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00457238223856618247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4939817386489990431.post-31587224319744481412014-10-24T17:40:41.602-07:002014-10-24T17:40:41.602-07:00For the record....I am ok with my email showing......For the record....I am ok with my email showing.....testing to see if students email would show......will have them enter next time.... : )Alien Art Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00457238223856618247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4939817386489990431.post-57568463735743343622014-10-24T05:37:55.909-07:002014-10-24T05:37:55.909-07:00I see no email address.I see no email address.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03632619520416980105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4939817386489990431.post-11570826754445634372014-10-24T05:12:22.875-07:002014-10-24T05:12:22.875-07:00This is a test entering the comment as "Unkno...This is a test entering the comment as "Unknown" (which is now an option after sending the first).<br /><br />Does it reflect my gmail address?......(I need to know because of students)<br /><br />SAlien Art Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00457238223856618247noreply@blogger.com